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July 11th, 2011, 10:35 PM
#1
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Workout Routine part 3
7:30 p.m. rolled around quicker than Jade would have thought possible, and as she packed up her little gym bag, slung it over her shoulder and stepped out of her house and walked to her car she felt the unmistakable twinge of anticipation between her legs. She felt this sensation before all of her fights, but this one was different, and she knew it. Not only was this mystery woman not backing down from Jade, but seemed to know exactly what Jade wanted, and wanted it too.
Goosebumps covered Jade?s body as she arrived at the gym, 8 o?clock, right on time she thought as she waited in her car parked at the side of the building until she saw headlights and a second car rolling into the lot. As Jade opened her door, so did the other lady and the walked in silence to the rear entrance, where Jade produced her copy of the key, which nobody knew she had, and allowed both ladies to enter before closing the door behind her and locking it back up. So far neither had said a word to each other, yet both seemingly knew exactly what the other was thinking as they walked towards the aerobics room in silence.
Once inside the room Jade finally spoke up, ?at least tell me your name, I like to know who my victims are.?
?You can call me Raven,? was all the black haired woman responded with before stripping down in a corner of the room, never pulling her eyes off of Jade as she disrobed. First her shoes and socks, followed by her tight workout pants, at this point Jade noticed that Raven wasn?t wearing any underwear. And finished with the removal of her sports bra. Raven now stood completely naked in front of Jade and all she could think about was that this body looked even tighter and more firm than it had in the shower earlier today when Raven pinned her up against the wall and issued her challenge.
Jade looked over the body once more, the tight hamstrings and quads, the lush ass that she could see reflecting in the wall to wall mirror behind her, the back feminine yet hard, her tits, clearly bigger than Jade?s now that she got a full view of them, yet just as high and firm, if not firmer than her own. The sharp features of her face stood out in the light as Raven stood there barely rising her chest with each breath, simply waiting for her opponent.
Jade took her time disrobing, something she enjoyed doing as it usually turned on her opponents and gave her the mental advantage. Turning her back to Raven, she bent over to untie her shoes and kicked them off, before pulling her socks off as well, making sure Raven saw every muscle pop and flex in her legs and ass as she did, before straightening up, grabbing the underside of her sports bra and tugging it over her head, unleashing her breasts and giving Raven a clear view of their heft and size by the amount of cleavage was able to be seen around her back. Jade finished by hooking her thumbs into the waistband of her shorts and peeling them slowly over her ass and down her hamstrings, clenching her pussy muscles allowing them to stay caught in her camel toe for a few moments as she tugged, a display that drove some women insane. Jade always reveled in watching the faces of her opponents as she plucked the fabric from between her lips, and when she looked up she realized that she?d made a fatal mistake.
The mirrored wall wasn?t in front of Jade, it was behind her. As she looked up she saw nothing but drab grey wall, not a mirror with which to see her opponent, and the next thing she knew she felt two silky smooth, yet powerful arms wrapping around her body and hoisting her into the air. Jade?s bottoms fluttered down between her legs and fell to the floor harmlessly while Raven snatched the woman in a bear hug and then slammed her forward into the wall.
Jade had no chance of escape as she was forced to take the brunt of the impact hard on her tits and the side of her face. Gasping at being caught in such a terrible predicament she cursed herself for being taken of guard and allowing this woman the early advantage. Jade?s ribs ached already, tits in pain as they were crushed between her and the wall, and to make it worse, Raven had started taunting already.
?I know who you are honey, and I know what you?ve been doing. Tonight all that stops. Tonight I take your place and begin to hunt MY prey,? Raven whispered into Jade?s ear before pulling her off the wall and slamming her forward into it once more.
Jade?s tits exploded in pain for a second time tonight as her head lolled back and she moaned in pain, trying to think of a way out seemed nearly impossible right now as her ribs were crushed and her tits felt like they might explode.
Raven finally unwrapped her arms from around her foe, but wasn?t about to let her go quietly into the night. She balled up her fist and in rapid succession began slamming them into the desperate woman?s back, focusing on her kidney area.
Jade screamed in pain as the fists slammed into her back one after another, causing convulsions to race through her body as she gripped the wall and bucked with each seemingly impossibly powered fist that crushed her back, finally sliding down the wall to her knees, and dropping her ass on her ankles as she rested there once the barrage stopped. Her eyes half shut, her body already wracked with pain, she didn?t know how she could go on, but knew she must.
Raven stopped punching and took a step back to admire her handy work, feeling as though she?d made short work of this so-called fight queen. Raven stepped back in and wrapped both her hands into Jade?s hair and began hauling her up onto her feet again when she was met with resistance in the form of an elbow, driven straight back into her. The elbow landed squarely on Raven?s clit and debilitated her momentarily as she released her hold on Jade?s hair and stumbled backwards clutching her womanhood.
Jade couldn?t believe the fortune of the placement of her elbow, but didn?t bother questioning it now. She needed to recover, but knew her recovery was going to be much longer than Raven?s and if she wanted to get back into this she needed to strike, so she pulled herself up, turned to face the black haired woman and began lashing out. Punch after punch rained down on Raven?s face, chest, arms, and midsection. Jade was a woman on a mission as she fired bomb after bomb at Raven?s body.
Raven, for her part, covered up nicely but it was clear the punches were beginning to do damage and take a toll, her nose was bloody, her left tit expanded and red, her right eye already sporting a shiner as she backed away from the punches. The closer Raven got to the wall behind her, the more Jade?s eyes lit up with confidence. Jade backed Raven farther across the room until one of her punches missed their target and once again she was inside Raven?s grasp.
Raven had always been able to take an unusual amount of punishment, and that came in handy now as she took blow after blow to her body, blocking some, dodging others, but most of the punches connected and rocked her, yet she still maintained her game-plan. Backing up step by step until the wall behind her closed in, then she waited for the punch, a right hook sent a little to wide that allowed her to duck under it, bat away the left jab that followed and slip through Jade?s defenses and once again lock her arms around the body of the brown haired woman. This time though she was going to exact a bit of revenge, as she stuck her ass out, took a step back, and fired her right knee up between the woman?s legs. The knee connected with a crunch, right on Jade?s clit, and the only sounds that escaped the woman?s O formed lips were a woosh of air and a little yelp.
The knee cracked up between Jade?s legs and she immediately went limp in Raven?s arms, her head woozy and foggy, her body wracked with pain, and now once again trapped in this vicious woman?s grip as she tried desperately to recover, but Raven had other plans as she turned and once again planted Jade on the wall, this time back first.
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July 11th, 2011, 10:37 PM
#2
Hostboard Member
Re: Workout Routine part 3
Just a warmup to whet the appetite some. 
Hope you all enjoy. I really love Shindy's style of righting and have tried to fashion it a bit off of him, without outright copying him. I hope nobody is offended by that, I just think he's an excellent writer, and I'm trying to put my own ideas into his story telling template.
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July 12th, 2011, 12:06 PM
#3
Senior Hostboard Member
Re: Workout Routine part 3
Hey Fanofthefights!
That's much more than just a warmup. I liked the long build-up and with Jade's viscious attitude, I except this fight to go back and forth and the violence to escalate. Looking forward to see some busted implants, cracked pubic bone or damaged clits!
Please go on like this, thanks for providing to this board!
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July 12th, 2011, 05:12 PM
#4
Junior Hostboard Member
Re: Workout Routine part 3
Great job so far! I am also a fan of the way Shindy writes stories and I have to say I think you have done a great job emulating his style. Cannot wait to see how this fight progresses, but I also hope you continue to write on this forum in the future.
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